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Thanks for the character intro, Laiudanama. Looks good. Trystan. Hmmmm..... That looks like a Dunlending name, does it not, Anguirel? ![]() Good interplay there, Jenny & Feanor, picking up on the Dol Amroth connection! |
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
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I've just got back from a long time of absence and not being able to keep up. Could I be informed of where we are in time? How many days after the court date is it?
And also, who has left the inn? I will read a few of the most recent posts, and I will scan the others real quick, but I would like not to have to really read all of them if at all possible. -- Folwren
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It is currently the morning after the court date. It will be a brief day before a couple-day time jump. Lin and Farahil are leaving this morning for Dol Amroth. Leof is in the stable with Farahil; Degas is in the courtyard with Garstan's daughter and Lin; Eodwine is just around the corner from them; Kara appears to be in the kitchen; everyone else is either still asleep or just rising, I believe, as it's just dawn now. Lai's Trystan just showed up, which might prolong and/or complicate things a little, but in a fun way, as he's an outlaw from Dol Amroth that Farahil may or may not have encountered recently. Does that help?
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Yes, thank you, it does.
If this day is short, can I skip writing in it? It will take a few days, correct? And it will take less time if I do not join in. Next week, Monday morning through Friday afternoon, is my last week for working at camp. If this Day at the Hall takes that long, it would be great, because then I wouldn't fall behind at all, especially if it's not necessary that Thornden comes in at all in this part of the story. He would, however, be out there to say goodbye, probably. If I'm not around to write that, then someone can mention that he was there, and maybe Jenny could write that part and have him say a few words. I don't care that much. What do you all think? -- Folwren EDIT: Come to think of it - if Thornden is needed in help with this Trystan fellow, then I'll write. He looks like a handful and Leof is too little to manage such a handful. Also, Eodwine is wanting to say a proper goodbye to Lin, so it wouldn't be very nice to him if he had to deal with it.
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"Tell them I came, and no one answered, that I kept my word," he said. Never the least stir made the listeners, though every word he spake Fell echoing through the shadowiness of the still house from the one man left awake |
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Mostly all right. Leof's a tad too accepting in the last paragraph - how about instead of "grinned back, as if in relief," put "nodded slowly, as if in acceptance" or something? Other than that, it looks fine.
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Farahil... I should have provided the link sooner, but I didn't really expect that anybody would need to know much about him.
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Is he bigger or taller than Thornden? In Thornden's profile in the Abduction in Edoras, Thornden was said to be 6'4". I met my cousin the other day after not seeing him for seven years and he's 6'4" and huge. My eyes just about popped out of my head. I'd no idea what an imposing figure that would cut. I'd seen 6 feet and 6'2", but two inches really ads a lot. . .
Anyway, I was wondering where you think Farahil stood. -- Folwren
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A lot depends on build, as well. 6'4" and thin is a lot different than 6'4" and burly. My pastor (who just left
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Ooh, that was low. Ooh...
Fun? I'd hate to have you as a teacher, elempee ![]() ![]()
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La Belle Dame sans Merci
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I haven't laughed so hard in... ooh, this is nasty.
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Okay. Garstan and children have come to say good-bye to Lin. Having given the tour of the current construction, he'll be back to discuss plans with Stigend in a moment. Hope that's okay.
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I've made a second post, but I accept that I've made quite alot of use of the characters of Farahil and Leofric, Feanor and Firefoot: if you aren't happy with this or want me to change anything, I'd be happy to do so. Hope this is alright, anyway ![]()
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"Tell them I came, and no one answered, that I kept my word," he said. Never the least stir made the listeners, though every word he spake Fell echoing through the shadowiness of the still house from the one man left awake Last edited by Laiudanama; 07-05-2006 at 03:56 PM. |
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I don't suppose Manawyth could be called in to help protect the horses, hee hee, hee, and keep down those filthy outlaws, ha ha ha...
Actually, I see the potential for an interesting conversation. Lai, our characters should have a drink together some time...
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My first post in a while is up ('A Nasty Shock for Trystan' - I sound like a chapter heading in an Enid Blyton book...) - sorry I've taken so long, it's been a somewhat busy Summer
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Just for the sake of clarity, what Celuien and I have been shooting for has been for Garmund and Falco to hit it off best with Lefun & Ritun (really sad names, I admit, but my imaginative powers are apparently faulty in that respect right now
![]() ![]() Falco has a mind to tell Thornden "he went thataway!" - but that does not answer Thornden's question. Foley, please feel free to write a post for Thornden in which Falco agrees to go back with him to Garmund, with whom they find Trystan. Celuein, will you have Garmund supply a description for Trystan? If so, could you have Falco and Thornden walk in on that? Ain't this interlinking fun? ![]() Okay, L&R are/is big but not that big. They're big from the hips down in order to support all that extra weight properly, but from the hips up, they're actually a little smaller than a normal human like Thornden, because of the deformity itself. So let's just say that L&R come in at a grand total of 5 feet, 4 inches high, but thicker as a dwarf in the legs. Any questions? Last edited by littlemanpoet; 09-04-2006 at 07:43 PM. |
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Just to clarify: L&R are not the man Trystan thinks they are (hmm, grammar-wrenching...), he's paranoid about another individual from his recent past catching him up. But it could allow a little revelation, which is always fun ![]()
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