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Old 02-23-2006, 02:51 PM   #34
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Sorry for dragging this old thread back to licht but I have reread FoG and found one place that did bother me:

FG-B-04:
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... Fearful too they were for that {slaughter}[victory that] Rog had done amid the Balrogs, because ...
Is a victory done? And anyway is it victory to be slain with all your following? I would suggest:
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... Fearful too they were for that {slaughter}[tremendous fight] Rog had done amid the Balrogs, because ...
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