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06-12-2004, 08:34 PM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: watching the ants closing in
Posts: 292
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I added more as well as changed a few things. I hope that's better! If not, I s'pose I shall just have to keep thinking up more to add. I reread it as best I could with others reading over my should (*glares at them*) and have to go soon.
Alatariel 
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