* * Revised Fall of Gondolin pt.5 -- >end [the remaining sections] * *

[Maédhros]

Like Findegil, I don't see the purpose of eliminating "for there are grievous hurts to Middle-earth which thou maybe shalt heal".

This was my mistake actually, I thought that it was referring that the Elessar would heal the hurts to Middle-earth.
I like your suggestion better.
If Findegil ok with that, the thing that we are missing from part 5 is the Oarni - Earni the only issue missing?