An Audience With The King -- Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Rimbaud · 11-12-2002, 03:02 PM

The utilisation of a structure-providing narrator would have been invaluable, from my admittedly neutral perspective. Perhaps had one of the mentor/Moderators tied some of the story-lines together with some strategically placed posts, the story would not have seemed so formless.

I wrote this whilst at work, so rather than the infamous two cents, this post cost _______________, LLC approximately $2.73 at around 7 minutes of my time.

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[Edit] It doesn't look like much typing for seven minutes, I know, but I spent the majority of that time working out what the post was worth...

[ November 13, 2002: Message edited by: Rimbaud ]

11-12-2002, 03:02 PM	#34
Rimbaud The Perilous Poet Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Heart of the matter Posts: 1,062	The utilisation of a structure-providing narrator would have been invaluable, from my admittedly neutral perspective. Perhaps had one of the mentor/Moderators tied some of the story-lines together with some strategically placed posts, the story would not have seemed so formless. I wrote this whilst at work, so rather than the infamous two cents, this post cost _______________, LLC approximately $2.73 at around 7 minutes of my time. [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] [Edit] It doesn't look like much typing for seven minutes, I know, but I spent the majority of that time working out what the post was worth... [ November 13, 2002: Message edited by: Rimbaud ] __________________ And all the rest is literature

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