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Spirit of the Lonely Star
Join Date: Mar 2002
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Helen - I would leave 14-19 where they are. I think you want to leave a little "time" between the letters and the actual place where you encounter Levanto. Should you move 20 back with 14-19? What do you think? Is there a special reason it needs to stand alone? (Perhaps something in the later story line?) sharon
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