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To keep the ending interesting, I propose that some bounty is on Naiore's head due to her being able to evade the King's company. So it could be anyone who finally brings Naiore in? Just a thought.
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I was just assuming that there is a sizeable bounty on Naiore's capture or death. So, let's go with that. It's the only way the subplot with the Underworlders really will work. I can't see them trying to befriend then betray her for the good of humanity! [img]smilies/evil.gif[/img]
Also, good outline, Snowdog! It's much less detailed than mine, which is good as it leaves the characters more room to move within the framework of the action.
Great work! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
[ August 04, 2003: Message edited by: Ealasaid ]
08-04-2003, 02:20 PM
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