ME Poetry, a feeble attempt

[Sapphire_Flame]

OMG Naurwen, that was so good!!! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] At the beginning I kind of thought it was Gollum talking, but as I went on it sounded more like Wormtongue talking about/to Eowyn. Am I right? *crosses fingers* But no matter. That is such a brilliant poem!

Now a detour; I have a poem of my own I'd like to post...

Vanya Syl (Fair Winds)

"Weathered pines
Standing tall amid a rubble of boulders.
Wind whistles mournfully through
Dry branches
The sky is grey,
Forshadowing a coming trouble.
A single mountain looms,
A dark sentinal over an open plain.
The wind shrieks over bare stones;
Fire licks over the horizon
Nearing the peak.
The golden-red beast, wings urging the fire,
Eyes glow with the thought
Of the gold hidden in the mountain.
Sending tongues of flame down the slopes,
He alights on the pinnacle:
A fiery point in a black cloud,
Gloating silently over his new domain.
The dragon has come."

(c)2002 Sarah Hansen

Abedithon le,

~*~Aranel~*~

[ August 07, 2003: Message edited by: Sapphire_Flame ]