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ArcusCalion · 09-27-2017, 05:11 PM

SM-EX-11.7: I would think it is, as the recapturing is not implied (it seems to me) and instead feels like two very different accounts being mushed together. I know we do not change for reasons of style, but in this case the attempted narrative is not clear (at least when I read it).

09-27-2017, 05:11 PM	#9
ArcusCalion Quentingolmo Join Date: Aug 2017 Posts: 525	SM-EX-11.7: I would think it is, as the recapturing is not implied (it seems to me) and instead feels like two very different accounts being mushed together. I know we do not change for reasons of style, but in this case the attempted narrative is not clear (at least when I read it).