Friends of Nimrodel: Tapestry of Dreams - Discussion

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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet

1. Have the meeting between Mellondu and Elessar (which I can edit into the beginning of my recent post).

I was assuming Formendacil would carry that part-- but I admit confusion on my own part when I saw it summarized, and only just realised that "edit into the beginning of my recent post" could mean "expansion and detail added."

Formendacil?....

Originally Posted by littlemanpoet

2. Erebemlin's talk with Mellondu's parents.

*draws a blank* Er, what conversation, and what's left to talk about? I had imagined much gathering of provisions, and the decision as to who is accompanying Erebemlin and Mellondu?

3. Any fleshing out of characters as their writers see fit, considering the events I've narrated.

If anything I have written needs to be revised to fit better with your characters, please let me know and I will do it. But at least now we have a much more limited plot outline to trudge through. Hope you don't mind my initiative-taking.