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03-07-2003, 01:56 PM
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Stormdancer of Doom
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars
Posts: 4,349
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Pio: Hurray! I like it. Especially the way you added that extra line that wove the twins (defensively but calmly)into your distance from Lorien-- it gives the impression that motherhood might actually calm Pio down somewhat.
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