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12-20-2018, 05:55 PM
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Quentingolmo
Join Date: Aug 2017
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3) For me Fin, your construction is still awkward in that it mentions Celeborn going to Lorien twice in a row for no particular reason. I think we should just keep "and fortified it against any further attempts of Sauron to cross the Anduin" as part of RP-SL-32b.
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