Only time for a very quick post before I have to go, but I will get back on all the points in the evening.
The Duel looks so good. ^.^ It's delightful.
I agree with the Yes/No dichotomy. It works as a parallel, and it's close enough in meaning.
"You only destroy": I am honestly not sure which version I am more a fan of, this, or the original (you may only do so by killing us). Sauron as the judge of Finrod's fate, or Sauron the fallen Maia. Or, "Only to destroy" - which gathers up both, perhaps?
"Answer me first" sounds better by the V1 melody. I don't remember well enough how Jareth!Finrod does this part, but I can check tonight.
The syllable count in Sauron's last is on point.
Ahhh, I'm late! Be back witb the rest.
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You passed from under darkened dome, you enter now the secret land. - Take me to Finrod's fabled home!... ~ Finrod: The Rock Opera
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