Child - Great post! I will place it on the thread at the end of the first installment. I have one request... do you mind if we attribute the following line to Fador instead of Barakah?
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“But you are not a member of this clan.” Barakah objected.
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Fador is the one "chairing" the meeting, so I think that he would chime in on matters of speaking and protocol, letting Barakah carry on with the general questioning. After Aiwendil explains himself, Fador would grant him permission to speak by a nod or a gesture, then Barakah could continue with her speech as you have it written.
Please let me know if that would be all right!