Of course it's alright! Very nice indeed! Adeline would not have had anything to say, and all that Calnan said was perfect. Yes, very nicely done!
And yes, I think leaving that as my last post might be best. Anymore would be overdoing it, I think. Adeline would of course go to the execution, but I think this time she would do no more than watch, and not as happily as she thought.
-Durelin