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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet
I thought bride's maids always preceded the bride into the place of the rite.
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Well, in American (and most European) culture, sure - but who's to say in Rohan, they didn't follow?
For some reason I pictured her just at Saeryn's right shoulder, a little bit behind. She can go before, certainly.
Maybe I got the idea from my sister-in-law's wedding. When she was married, we bridesmaids didn't go before her. We escorted her down. There were four of us, two went ahead and two went behind. (See picture if you want a visual explanation.)
Anyway, below I re-wrote it. Use whichever version you prefer.
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Rowenna's eyes widened in momentary surprise, then smiled in spite of herself at Thornden's compliment. "Thank you. I think the mood of the event has gotten in your veins, Thornden."
He chose not to take that to mean what it could conceivably mean and he only laughed. "I am very happy for lord Eodwine and lady Saeryn," he replied, and then they became quiet as they drew near the gathered people.
Randvér frowned, standing in the circle. Ginna pulled Harreld into the circle and stood beside her father. So the young woman stood between her father and the man she seemed to have chosen, giving Randvér much opportunity to glance sidewise at his prospective son in law. He was a big man! And seemingly gentle. But the rite was about to begin.
Eodwine and Thornden came into the circle, dressed in their finest, and took their places at the center of the circle. The people quieted and craned their necks to see if they could catch a glimpse of the bride and bride's maid who waited outside the circle.
Then the old man visitor, the one called Eodwemer, stepped out of the crowd and stood before the bride and groom.
"Folk of Scarburg," he said, "your lord Eodwine has asked me to guide the rite. He thinks that my length of years have given me wisdom." The old man chuckled at the notion. "In any case, I am honored and will do my best to honor his choice. So let the bride's maid and bride enter the circle!"
Saeryn took a final breath and felt her face blush one last time. Degas stepped up to her side and she looked at him. He smiled and offered her his arm and she gave him a thankful smile in return as she took it. Then she turned to Rowenna and nodded her head. Rowenna stepped forward and led the way down through the people to where Eodwine stood waiting.