Undómë,
Sounds good. I'll edit that post tonight.
Folwren,
Yes, I'm really glad this all worked out, and I'm sorry if I gave you a great big headache.
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As to how to continue, Athwen can also run in and help. If she looks up and over to see the women and children attacked and then kind of runs forward in alarm, sees them all scattered, and then sees Azhar hurt, perhaps Dorran can jump in against the slaver, Athwen can run forward and get Azhar (move her, half carry, half drag, maybe) while Dorran distracts the slaver. And then Lindir can come and help Dorran.
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I like this approach a lot. Let's run with it. I'm not sure if I'll get the post up tonight since I'm behind on everything. But I'll be working on it soon.
Addendum : My post is edited. Things are still grim, but not as helpless as before! I'll write the second part tonight or tomorrow.