Don't be too hard on yourself
Mnemo... RL surely intervenes every once in a while and you did spectacularly.
I was using some comments made of this game only to refer to a more wider issue about ww-narrations in general. I mean I know there are actually two "schools" on this: those who want to follow the events in the game loyally (even to the extent that they use actual quotations from the game in the narrations) and those who have literary - or other - ideas and then fill in the players as they see fit - if they see them fit. (And I have probably done both as a mod even if I'd say I mainly belong to the first "school".)
That was actually the issue I wished to stir some discussion over but seemingly it's a turn-off subject.