Please people I would love for you to look over my two laments and say which one you'd prefer more, and any lines that should be revised, changed, or added in any way so I can get on the translation, I'm afraid I might not have any time to do so on Saturday because of my grad.
It would be greatly appreciated to hear what you think or if you think its best to drop the whole idea.
Eternally,
Esgallhugwen
