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I am assuming, however, that, whatever you may specifically decide about the genreal group planning and Khamir, the spoken words of your character--the emotional outburst--will remain the same and that is what Dorran will attempt to answer.
Let me know if you have any other concerns and I'll try to respond before I write the post.
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I have no other concerns right now. It took enough of my creativity to come up with the last one making the two groups to come together in a reasoned way as they had already encountered, so everything will be fine with me for a while...
But we'll listen to Durelin, if she wants to change something...
I'm looking forwards to see how this will be turned the good way around. I don't think that it is too hard, but it requires some measures some of the people involved might mot be ready to take / give so easily...