Looking through the drafts up to "Of the Rings of Power" it seems to flow nicely, but the Elessar sub-section feels jarring. There are two variants of the story. Version 1 must be in the Third Age since it involves Olorin. But version 2 is set at this point in the Second Age, so it was placed in this chapter. Since the Elessar section is very conjectural and involves two versions which take place at different times, would it make more sense to put this in Volume III: Assorted Lore?
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