NKD-SL-06b: I agree to the movement, but we have to take care about the editing marks. In its original palce this was the 1. paragraph of a longer part of
Appendix A and it was already marked with a 'b' as being the second variant under discussion. I propose to name the shortened add in the original place
NKD-SL-06c and name the paragraph about the hobbits used here
NKD-SL-06.05.
NKD-SL-06.1: I agree to the insert and to the gramatical change, but at least evnen if 'Shire' should have a kapital 'S' the article 'the' shouldn't have a capital 'T'. But I like to propose a different edit:
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NKD-SL-06.1<LotR Prologue Forty leagues {it}the land of the Hobbits stretched from the Far Downs to the Brandywine Bridge, and fifty from the northern moors to the marshes in the south. The Hobbits named it the Shire, as the region of the authority of their Thain, ...
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NKD-SL-06.5: This is rather an editorial addition than a change for grammatical reasons. But I agree to it.
I as well agree to the rest of the changes.
Respectfully
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