Okay, Nogrod. Thanks for the tips and thoughts.
Hmph. That's not fair to hit the ball back in my court at this interval of the conversaiton. So not fair.
I'll do what I can. I am currently not home...but I will try to write something over the course of the next day or two. I don't think I can do it tonight.
I think I am liking just writing these individual posts as opposed to a PM post. And don't worry about there being monologues. I will write only what I think Thornden would say without trying to draw it out to make a post 'long enough', whatever length that may be. And in a real conversation, usually a person will wait until the other is finished speaking. However, that being said, if in any post that I write you think that Athanar would interrupt if you had a choice, tell me so, and I can edit it accordingly. I have no problem in getting rid of part of a post if your character would stop the flow earlier.
-- Folwren