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Old 04-01-2005, 06:30 AM   #10
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comments: My mistake, which I'm unable to correct. My previous should have been like this:

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Unfortunately, that very morning Legolas was polishing his bow with the "Mirkwood Bow Maintenance Kit" chestnut polish fluid #4, forgot to attach a string, and as a consequence, were unable to shoot at Gollum
Gimli was a typo It was Gollum who should have been deflated, right?

Should fortunately/unfortunately run alternately? I suppose yes?


Thing itself (or an essay to clear up the mess I've done myself ):

Unfortunately, Legolas, who have never used his arrows other than shooting them through his bow, stood stupefied, gaping at Gimli's horrible plight, and it never ocurred to him it was enough to pierce Gollum through the right place with an arrowhead.
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