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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet
1. Have the meeting between Mellondu and Elessar (which I can edit into the beginning of my recent post).
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I was assuming Formendacil would carry that part-- but I admit confusion on my own part when I saw it summarized, and only just realised that "edit into the beginning of my recent post" could mean "expansion and detail added."
Formendacil?....
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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet
2. Erebemlin's talk with Mellondu's parents.
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*draws a blank* Er, what conversation, and what's left to talk about? I had imagined much gathering of provisions, and the decision as to who is accompanying Erebemlin and Mellondu?
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3. Any fleshing out of characters as their writers see fit, considering the events I've narrated.
If anything I have written needs to be revised to fit better with your characters, please let me know and I will do it. But at least now we have a much more limited plot outline to trudge through. Hope you don't mind my initiative-taking.
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