3) I agree to the use of the '*****' as an editorial distinction, as I think it is enough. I as well agree with keeping
Of the Finding of the Ring as a subheading. As to
The Broken Bridge see below.
4) Hmm actually seeing it all laid out is indeed very different. I hadn't realized just how short this portion of the adventure was.... Very well, I will agree to the inclusion of these changes, albeit somewhat reluctantly. I do not deny that it is something I had wanted to be able to do somehow when I learned about the 1960 revisions, perhaps to include in the project a 'revised' Hobbit, but I see now that this way is better. Very well Fin, you have won me over
. I do not think Aiwendil will be that easy to convince, however, if he ever gets to this draft. I will also keep
The Broken Bridge as a sub-heading.
TS-QE-03: Agreed.
I must say, after all that whirlwind of confusion, that turned out to be remarkably simple. Well done Fin! Your flowers are most absolutely deserved.