TS-AA-02b: I agree, and I prefer the second option, with the Chieftain of the Dunedain info.
TS-SL-03/04: In the next post I will give my restructured form of this chapter, where these changes will be made. After that we can discuss the Quest for Erebor and how it could fit in.
TS-SL-05b/07b: Agreed.
TS-SL-09: Agreed. I have found a place for it in the final chapter.
TS-SL-10: Agreed.
Having incorporated these changes, I will make a new post in the same style as the first post, where I will lay out the new structure. I will only explain the changes which were not in the first draft or in this post.
Last edited by ArcusCalion; 07-10-2018 at 08:04 AM.
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