Pio,
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Did you want to have Rama and Miri speak about Rôg being gone at some time? It will set Rama wondering how he's gone and come so far, so quickly. If you'ld like I'll write the scene, or you can.
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This sounds good, especially the part about
you writing the scene. At some point after the end of day 3 (if I ever get down to filling in my save!), Ráma will also have a conversation with her sister. So we'll need to make sure that she's not in two places at the same time talking with two different people. Other than that, I see no problem at all.
I am quite fond of Pio's point #11 in the outline:
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11.) Day 6 would be the BIG meeting of the Elders where everyone is screaming at each other, Rama is officially declared a lunatic when rumors of what her mother said slip out, and we finally decide what we are going to do for the rest of the game.
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This is a most excellent synopsis of our plotting for the game.....
Cami