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lmp, a comment. The use of the word 'crone' has been bugging me. Could we not have Marigold using that word directly? And could we maybe even remove the word completely? To me it conjures up dusty literary analysis and jungian archetypes rather than the shimmering of faerie. Can she talk about "wearing this form" or "Taking this shape" instead? Something less... well, you know. Analytical. What's the word? Anthropological?
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