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Lhunardawen · 09-10-2007, 11:08 AM

First of all, I apologise for the long delay. I didn't know how to push this post into the story, and then difficult days came.

Second, I'm not sure it works. Personally I found it confusing, the sudden shifting in perspective, but I didn't know how else to deal with it. I didn't want to prune the PM-built conversation - not that I was sure how to.

Third, I probably took a bit of liberty concerning Harreld. Feel free to slap my writing hand in that case, or for any of the above reasons.

09-10-2007, 11:08 AM	#2030
Lhunardawen Hauntress of the Havens Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: IN it, but not OF it Posts: 2,538	First of all, I apologise for the long delay. I didn't know how to push this post into the story, and then difficult days came. Second, I'm not sure it works. Personally I found it confusing, the sudden shifting in perspective, but I didn't know how else to deal with it. I didn't want to prune the PM-built conversation - not that I was sure how to. Third, I probably took a bit of liberty concerning Harreld. Feel free to slap my writing hand in that case, or for any of the above reasons. Last edited by Lhunardawen; 09-10-2007 at 11:14 AM.