Thank you for your diligence gandalf!
1) This is fine for me.
2) I like this better as well. Agreed.
3) Yes, Fin did a wonderful job.
4) Agreed
5) Is this canon? That Gandalf did not know it was Thrain? I felt that it said he did somewhere.
6) Agreed
7) I like this placing much better.
8) no 8? lol
9) Agreed, nice transition. I would not make that sentence its own paragraph tho, and I would call that addition TS-FR-00.5 and keep the other as is.
10) I like this better, Agreed.
11) Nice find! Agreed.
12) Good catch! Agreed.
13) Thank you!
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