Maybe toward the end there could be a dialog between Frodo & Faramir in which Faramir has the opportunity to say "Not if I found it on the road would I take it." The conversation could progress revealing Faramir for the guy he really is and could end Faramir telling Frodo there was something "elvish" about him and Sam telling Faramir he reminds him of Gandalf. "There is something wizard-like about you."<P>Frodo still needs some shoring up. Perhaps more strength in his dealings with Gollum. Not too much though, I think there's enough Gollum.<P>Definitely more ents. I'd like to hear Treebeard reveal more about his previous conversations Saruman and hear him ask about the entwives.
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