Thanks for all the comments on Beren&Finrod. There was a lot of facepalming because duh, I should have thought of that. Unfortunately my schedule is not conducive to long revisions atm, but I will rework your comments in when I get home.
Meanwhile, here's a Walk To Work stanza:
O my Lord, upon our border
There is something out of order
Unidentified intruders (iiikh, will reconsider this line)
Entering your lands!