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Originally Posted by Galadriel55
Yeah, you jump an octave. I thought it was kinda cool at first, but then I started wondering if that was a sign the range is weird. Your call, I'm happy to do some shifts when it's done, just let me know.  |
It's just me starting without practicing, and not bothering to fix it. I can sing the whole thing at the higher octave no problem.
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Originally Posted by Galadriel55
I like this, for all the reasons you say. I think it can be read either way, it sounds good, it makes sense. I totally agree about the nice touch with shifting from "king" to "friend". "Could vs can"... I think "could" has a slightly nicer ring to it, and adds to your take on Finrod finding purpose in self-sacrifice without taking away the other meaning, but I don't feel strongly about it. Do you have a preference?
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I've put 'could' in; if it doesn't sing right I can always switch it.
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Originally Posted by Galadriel55
Loooool. I spent so much time trying to come up with plausible near-rhymes for "Beren"!  Wow. Well, I suppose it's no loss then. *shakes head at herself* |
In fairness I may have known when you first wrote it! A lot of water has passed under a lot of bridges since then, and some things that should not have been forgotten... were lost.
hS