Just a thought no one's mentioned, but Orodreth should be changed to Arothir, and he is the son of angrod, not finarfin. I can't find where it says this, but it's in the note on Gil-galad's parentage in PoME.
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Then Felagund upon the head
of Arothir set it: "Nephew mine,
till I return this crown is thine."
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