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Ruin of Doriath - Final Part
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11-19-2018, 01:21 PM
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This looks good to me. I also think ArcusCalion is probably right that we must remove this reference to the scantiness of the treasure of Nargothrond.
One small correction. In
RD-EX-40
:
Quote:
thou has asked for
Should be:
Quote:
thou hast asked for
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