Well, here is the
tweaked version, with a somewhat smoother transition between the quiet and rock parts, and a few minor tweaks. I may have accidentally changed the slow-down timing at the end. I think I put it back to how it was before, but I can't be sure. I hope I haven't shifted it enough to mess up the graphics timing at the very end. Sorry.
But - is this a smooth enough transition, or does that phrase just need redoing in a style independent of both themes?
And - any other tweaks that I missed?