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Originally Posted by Galadriel55
Do you just have a lot of time on your hands these days or something?  |
I just get easily distracted while working at home. Shhh, don't tell anyone. (Though most of the drawing was done at lunchtime, fear not.)
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Originally Posted by Galadriel55
EDIT: here is the Oath touched up, and the second stanza repeated with slight differences. I think the second stanza is a bit more defiant than the first, so maybe that point is getting better as well. Thanks for the mood description - it actually helped a lot to look at specific words for direction. Any other direction tips for further improvement, before I move on to the middle part? ;-) |
I was going to just talk about how singable it is, buuuuut I was sitting in front of the microphone, so:
Oath, take 1
(I have made no attempt to separate the voices, or even to be particularly Feanorionish; this is just me in normal singing mode.)
hS