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Rose Cotton · 10-10-2002, 01:57 PM

Um...here's my say on all this:

YES to Rose and Cami going to the caves early. We can do this two ways.
1. Cami thinks it's a good idea and they find someway to get there.
2. Rose gets into some mischieve. She already wanted to go to the caves with Daisy so it would make scence for her to try. And then either she can drag Cami into it or Cami can just decide to follow.

NO to the convienent need for somthing iron. Making our weapons with no excuse is a chance to but a bit of suspence into the story. Your right Helen, the men are not that stupid. Perhaps they could figure out that we're doing somthing and so we have a little difficutly escaping. If the rescue goes too smoothly it won't be much of a climax to our story. No climax ever runs smoothly. Ex: LotR: Frodo wasn't supposed to put the ring on and he wasn't supposed to lose a finger but in the end it turned out alright.

I want to be on the edge of my seat as we write this ending. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]

10-10-2002, 01:57 PM	#361
Rose Cotton Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: A place worse then Mordor........School! Posts: 1,075	Um...here's my say on all this: YES to Rose and Cami going to the caves early. We can do this two ways. 1. Cami thinks it's a good idea and they find someway to get there. 2. Rose gets into some mischieve. She already wanted to go to the caves with Daisy so it would make scence for her to try. And then either she can drag Cami into it or Cami can just decide to follow. NO to the convienent need for somthing iron. Making our weapons with no excuse is a chance to but a bit of suspence into the story. Your right Helen, the men are not that stupid. Perhaps they could figure out that we're doing somthing and so we have a little difficutly escaping. If the rescue goes too smoothly it won't be much of a climax to our story. No climax ever runs smoothly. Ex: LotR: Frodo wasn't supposed to put the ring on and he wasn't supposed to lose a finger but in the end it turned out alright. I want to be on the edge of my seat as we write this ending. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] __________________ "There's nothing you can do, Harry... nothing... he's gone."-Remus Lupin "The closer we are to danger, the further we are from harm."-Pippin (now how can you argue with that logic?)