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Old 06-11-2020, 02:45 PM   #382
Legate of Amon Lanc
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Actually perfect. *is tempted to go and start browsing to see whether there are any good ones, or some "overpowered" ones*
I realised immediately that majority are about someone walking, riding, going or arriving somewhere. But not necessarily bad. There are other interesting ones, too. And many can be quite lengthy, which is fun.

For the current situation, I would propose:

"Pippin lay in a dark and troubled dream: it seemed that he could hear his own small voice echoing in black tunnels, calling Frodo, Frodo!"
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