I will come back to 'Camp' and 'Duet' tomorrow (probably tomorrow), but inspiration has just struck for the 'duty' triplet. How about this:
But this is MY will
This is my will
This is my will!
Duty, not rage.
It dilutes it slightly, but the rest of the verse has been 'we did this because of the Oath'. Now he's saying 'this is what I choose to do - not out of anger, but out of duty'. (I think I stuck 'rage' in for 'revenge' in the Renunciation, so there's precedent.)
hS
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