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Old 07-25-2020, 02:59 PM   #168
Galadriel55
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Two versions of Melian sent, and PM box cleared. I am so excited to see what visuals you came up with...

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Originally Posted by Huinesoron View Post
That line's always been a tricky one. I don't think I've actually shifted that bit, just put a few extra syllables in after it. (I think I may have fumbled it on the recording, so I may rerecord that verse anyway.)

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Yeah... I was reading it as "WITH my BElov'd DAUGHter (slower) AND with MY dear WIFE". But you read the E in beloved, which means that all my comments about how the rhythm and whatnot go are again misplaced, though well-meant. Do whatever feels more comfortable when you sing it, and maybe stop listening to me when I tell you the scansion is wrong.

But on a different note (pun totally intended) - is there any piece that you would like to do next?



PS: I doubt I'll be using Flat.io, but just in case I still shared the file with you (properly this time).

PPS: Listening to recording again... "hero absurd" and "what a nerve!" are perfect, very Thingol!
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