Fall of Gondolin separation:
lindil, Aiwendil, Antoine and other active members:
As I was trying to make some comments on the FOG part 3, I realized that while the changes had been well documented and marked, in the text of the Fall of Gondolin, I was not sure where part 3 started and ended, and not only part 3 but the other ones as well.
This is what I propose we do when dealing with FOG and other future projects (This was done with the Ainulindalë), that we number the paragraphs as CT does, i.e. QS.
What I essentially did was to begin part 3 with Tuor in Gondolin and end it with Maeglin's Treachery, when he returns to Gondolin.
To me at least, it helps me visualize it better.
I began with paragraph § 1, when Of Tuor and his Coming to Gondolin ends. I have applied the General Changes to it, and then I will apply the approved ones too.
P.S. I think that there are some General changes that need discussing too.
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