Perhaps, Naiore could feign a change of heart since she feels it unlikely that she will be able to go west. She might feel that she needs to reunite her “family” to save her own skin and make her look sincere. (Think Sauron after Melkor’s defeat). Or then again maybe she could be a bit repentant, but too proud or reluctant to admit it.
This way one can focus on the internal dynamics without a lot of disruptive travel and the questions of who has horses and who doesn't. [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] Naiore could obtain Vanwe and be moving on to find Menecin.
It could be fascinating to see the contrast of good and evil qualities in both Naiore and Kaldir, especially if the reader is kept undecided about each or possibly kept hoping for each one’s rehabilitation until the end.
Just a thought.
[ July 24, 2003: Message edited by: Hilde Bracegirdle ]
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