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Originally Posted by Folwren
I am under the distinct impression that he is speaking with Athanar himself. Am I not correct?  |
Absolutely! It must be Athanar he's speaking with...
Although that being the case I would like you
Groin to make a few minor adjustments to your post...
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The man looked at the extended hand as if he had never shook hands before. It was a very reluctant hand shake.
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which would be incorrect... lord Athanar would shake a hand firmly and even quite in a tough way. He is a veteran soldier and a commander who doesn't shy away of hand-shakes... on the contrary.
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“What do you mean by that?” The man’s voice contained some irritation in it.
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It would not be irritation, but curiosity. Athanar is no fool and meeting this "everyman" from Scarburg would give him a lot of information so he would be rather more interested in hearing what Erbrand has to say. So no irritation...
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“Then how did you mean it?” The man was becoming obviously vexed.
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lord Atrhanar would not grow more vexed but more interested...
But otherwise, A nice idea I'll try to answer in a moment...