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Old 02-05-2004, 11:17 PM   #62
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As I was reading Part 2 of our Fog, I had a change of mind in the following change:
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FG-TG-01
{Then Tuor's heart was heavy and Voronwë wept and Tuor sat by the great fountain of the king and its splashing recalled the music of the waves, and his soul was troubled by the conches of Ulmo and he would return down the waters of Sirion to the sea.}
In the later story, the urging of Ulmo through Tuor that Turgon prepare an assault on Angband is gone, as should be Tuor's weeping.
The parragraph before this is where Turgon rejects Tuor's (Ulmo's) advice. Although, jallanite does have a point, I don't see why wouldn't Tuor and Voronwë wouldn't be sad if their errand was rejected by Turgon.
What do you think?

<font size=1 color=339966>[ 9:17 AM February 06, 2004: Message edited by: Maédhros ]
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