Thanks for all the feedback. I'll get to those revisions this evening. I haven't decided yet what to do with Dorran next. When I do, I'll let you know here for sure.
I wanted to get a post up for Azhar next.
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Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.
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