Thanks for your input guys, it helps me continue with my work to know that other people like it! LMP your critiques are appreciated, I'll change those lines it sounds better with them, way more Elf like, more flowing.
Ha, I guess those lines do sort of sound like a shampoo commercial.
New Herbal Elves formula doesn't burn sensitive Elven eyes and keeps hair silky and clean when fighting orcs.
Anyway, sounds good to me LMP, Eswen and Lumiel will more than likely be gone before the rest wake up. Now I have to start on the translation.
