I know, I'm biased. I admit it freely. It's really quite bad. But it's all Garreth's fault. If he hadn't put down the Lady Eowyn, perhaps Quin wouldn't have reacted in the opposite direction.
Actually, I think I'm almost entirely unfit to write any male character.
Excepting Thornden, I guess. I need to get him back into the action.
-- Foley