LC-14: Okay, I am not adamant on keeping this passage.
LC-17: I agree to the placement, but we should name the addition at this place LC-03.5.
LC-18: After rethinking the issue I belive we should change all occurenc of re-birth to re-housing and of re-born to re-housed. In that way it is much clearer and since that uncertainty is created by our using the earlier text in the later context.
LC-20: Was the time of waiting a kind of 'nourishing'? I don't think so. It feels more like purification and correction. Therefore I think we should change it.
Respectfully
Findegil
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